Restaurants
are spread at various places in one country. There is always a
competition between restaurants for attracting more people. People prefer going
to Linda's restaurant rather than going to its competitor , Jose's restaurant
.consequently, there are differences in the prices, services , and facilities.
First
of all , the prices in the two restaurants are different. Each restaurant
provides salads , soup , drinks , sandwiches ,and desserts . However , the
prices in Linda's are cheaper than the prices in Jose's. For example , salads
at Linda's costs 3.50 while it costs 4.50 at Jose's . An additional example is that
desserts cost 2.00 at Linda's. In contrast , at Jose's desserts cost
3.00.Consequently , people eat in Linda's as it provides cheaper prices.
In
addition , the second difference lies in the services. To illustrate , Linda's
opens from 7a.m to 9 p.m while Jose's opens from 7a.m to7p.m . Moreover ,
Linda's offers different services such as the services of carry-out and home
delivery .On the contrary , these services are not available at Jose's.Furthermore
, there are three cashiers in rush hour at Linda's. On the other hand , there
are only two cashiers in rush hour at Jose's. As a result , people are
attracted to Linda's more than Jose's.
Finally
, the third difference is the facilities of both restaurants . For example,
Linda's has good facilities such as 12tables and 48 chairs . In contrast , Jose's
has only 8 tables and32 chairs .Moreover , there are 20 parking spaces at Linda's
while there are 10 parking spaces at Jose's. The most significant example is
that Linda's has a playground for kids at Jose's. Linda's provides modern
facilities such as the air conditioner .Unlike Linda's, Jose's provides only
ceiling fans.Last but not least , Linda's offers more proper facilities that
attract more people.
In
conclusion ,it is clear that Linda's is better than Jose's . The prices ,services,and
facilities shows the best restaurant which is Linda's restaurant.
firstly,I think that the sentence "restaurants are places......."is not acceptable as we already know that this is the fanction of all restaurants.Don not forget that is my view may be right or may be false ok.
ردحذفscondly,an additional example is or is that.
You can say "the additional example is + noun." Or"the additional example is that+ full sentence."
حذف" Restaurants are spread at various places in one country."
ردحذفIt is Arabic . Also, you have to say "Restaurants spead ......"
"there are differences in the prices, services , and facilities." Add "between them."
"Finally , the third difference is the facilities of both restaurants " It is better to say :"Finally, the facilities of both are different." Or "The third difference is the facilities of both."
"Linda's has good facilities such as 12tables and 48 chairs"Try to change it.
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ردحذفmention three differences and three passages